Free Copy Critique
Give Me 45 Minutes And I’ll Help You…
This is a limited opportunity. It’s meant for ambitious, action oriented entrepreneurs who have a real internet business.
It’s meant for the kind of entrepreneur who has the relentless desire to make more money this year than in the past from your sales letter.
It’s meant for the kind of entrepreneur who has the belief in yourself, to believe today, that tomorrow you may actually be able to increase your website conversion rates by 10% or more – as you connect with the right person to help you get the job done.
And, finally, it’s meant only for the entrepreneur who is willing to make the sacrifices that these kind of changes require. One who is willing to modify your letter… endure the testing … fight the inevitable battles – where you struggle with doing what you think is right and what you’ve tested to be right.
And, above all, an entrepreneur who is willing to make the changes and know they can handle the deluge of sales that will come in.
Do you have 45 minutes to get the kind of results you’ve been wanting? To accept its incredible rewards? If you do, read on. If you don’t, consider yourself lucky and move on – there’s nothing left in this letter that will make any sense to you.
To Make Huge Increases In Conversion,
You Have To Throw Out Your Ego
And Allow A Professional To Look At Your Work.
What I’m not selling on this page is a means to an end. It’s a way to help you increase the conversions of your website by 10% or more. It’s unusual for most copywriters to give a free copy critique. First because it distills a professionals knowledge and expertise into a 45 minute targeted profit explosion. And, second, because it reveals (to you) the almost completely unknown profit making copy strategies many gurus use.
Let me emphasize right here that you do NOT need to put out any money for this. I’ll deliver this to you for FREE. And you’ll be able to test and use these changes right away. They’ll work for you because I will break down your copy with precision and show you exactly what to change.
Here is a brief description of what I’ll cover with you in your copy critique…
Opportunity Radar!
We want to look at your copy from the mind of your prospect and make sure there are Big-Money concepts littered within. I’ll show you how to implant gold nuggets of information that will be mined by your prospect with eagerness. You’ll have them wrapped around your little pinky with attention and desire almost instantly…
And simple changes are all it takes for you to begin increasing your conversions. I’ll show you exactly where to place these nuggets and how they should fit into your sales letter.
Stop Using Headlines They’ve Seen Before!
Stop your prospects in their tracks with a headline they’ve never seen before that grabs them by their eyeballs and yanks them into your letter.
In your copy critique you’ll be given a minimum of three different headlines you can use to increase your conversion rate almost instantly. You’ll be able to test each one to see which gives you the greatest number of sales.
The headlines you get will give you the control you need to start improving on your letter almost immediately. In fact if you have everything setup you could begin seeing increases in conversions within just a few hours.
Timing For Maximum Profits!
Timing for your market is an integral piece of the success of your sales letter. If you take the wrong tone with your prospect and make assumptions it’s possible you could blow your chances of making a sale right there.
That’s why you’ve got to know your market, what they’re thinking, how much they know about what they want, and at what buying stage they’re in. Several lifetimes of information about this concept alone have been written but many writers still miss this key profit maximizer.
The Power Of Saying!
Now, the rules to avoid making yourself look like a fool! You’ll be able to side-step the hundreds of skeptical prospects that enter your site every day.
As a few examples – here are the two major areas you can instantly improve your conversion rate. Proof of results combined with powerful testimonials will give your copy the needed power to convert prospects to buyers. I will go through your copy with a fine tooth comb and identify where these power elements can be improved and strengthened to fire-up the buying furnace within your customer.
Double Your Chances Of A Sale!
Many have proven this element over and over. If you have an irresistible offer that can’t be refused your prospect has no reason not to buy from you. That’s why I’ll inspect your offer to ensure it is the strongest you can provide.
Because if your copy rocks and your offer sucks you’ll suffer a slow death with dismal conversions. Your prospect needs to feel as though you’re giving them the most value you can possibly give and have reason for it. You’re copy has to be always on!
You’ll be given the keys you need to improve your offer so your customer is frothing at the mouth for your product or service.
The Ultimate Money Maker!
If you’re like most people you probably skim letters and only dip in when something catches your eye. With the critique I’m about to hand you – you’ll be given the secret to keeping people entrained in your letter for longer and that keeps them sliding towards a buying frenzy.
Plus you’ll learn how to switch their mind from scanner to reader in an instant, all specifically for your sales letter.
Don’t Risk Disappointments And Terrible Conversion Rates!
Fill In The Form Below For Your FREE Copy Critique….
You’ll receive a personalized copy critique for you sales letter absolutely FREE! You’re probably wondering why I’m making this offer to you, especially for FREE. Considering I usually charge $1,000 for a copy critique and rarely make an offer like this you’ve got a great opportunity to take me up on.
There are actually two main reasons I’m doing this.
- The first is slightly self-centered. As I help you increase your conversions the more you’ll want to work with me later.
- I believe that you have to give in life to create balance. And if I provide you with as much value as I can, I’ll have made an impact in your life and that will cause you to refer your friends and colleagues to me in the future.
You see, when I help you increase your conversion by 10%, 20%, 30% you’ll not only have a cash machine for your website you’ll also think of me when you start your next campaign. You have an established relationship with me now and you trust me with all of your products. Now you’ll want me to do more for you so that you can maximize your results.
The choice is up to you…
You could continue with your dismal conversion results making minimum wage from your sales letter or you can fill in the information below and get a FREE copy critique that will maximize your conversions and give you the exact tools you need to make more money.
It costs you nothing to prove this to yourself!
***I’m out of slots, and I’ll open it again when I free up my time.***
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P.S. As you recognize how great this offer is I’m not sure what excites you more, your increase in conversions or the cash stream you’ve created, only after you fill in the form below.
P.P.S. Free is a no brainer opportunity and when you get increases in your conversions, up to 50% or more, imagine what you’ll do with all the extra money.
P.P.P.S. This is a very limited opportunity. Because I personally take on each of these critiques I can only add limited amount to my current work load. I’m not sure how long I’m going to run this for free, so you should only take me up on this copy critique offer if you’re serious.
***I’m out of slots, and I’ll open it again when I free up my time.***
